Tuesday, May 7, 2013

Dorian Sosa_ Book crit 3


Again I re-did the first spread and have three slightly different designs for it so I can get some feedback as to which one works best (The first three samples are for the same spread) I used two different pictures for the water and would like to know which pic is best. Also I treated the word 'matter' differently, I think the one with the whole text of the same size is more successful. The last two pages are also two different designs for another spread but they are not finished.  














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  1. Hey Dorian I saw this page on stumbleupon and thought of your project immediately! :)
    http://www.stumbleupon.com/su/8CFAhI/:JGRmyPnY:GBkG-xl6/www.ignant.de/2012/10/25/a-due-colori/

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