The copy on this is definitely going to change, but I want to stick with the color scheme and usage of rectangles to separate/combine elements. The typeface is supposed to be Futura but once I opened it on the CDM computers the font was lost on some of these spreads.
The color scheme and arrangement you have looks really great. I tried playing with multiple colors as an original idea but got frustrated with how it looked so I kept to one color and black and white. But you've pulled off these colors well. I also really look forward to seeing the finished project if you go with the humor side mentioned in class...bitchez.
ReplyDeleteI really liked the way you are adding humor in this. Its really nice and the colors fit perfect. I think the white outline mentioned in class would be great for some of the other pieces you have.
ReplyDeleteI'm so glad that you are using this abc book as a vehicle for humor! I think the only thing you could do wrong would be to not push it far enough. Getting really insulting will be a challenge, but also very funny! I agree with using a little more white in some of the pages, but overall I think you have a great color scheme and idea!
ReplyDeleteThe humor you're using in the set is really great, but I'd like to see you really push it like discussed in class. I also enjoy how you play with positive and negative space.
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