I really love the simplicity of this design and how clean it looks. The only thing I would change is the font color. The red is sometimes hard to read when it gets to the dark grey. Maybe even switching up the colors in each composition or putting a hint of color in the grey letters somewhere might look nice.
The only suggestion I have is that you somehow separate the header and body text from the background (more-so than by changing the color). Perhaps a box underneath both of them (with lowered opacity so you can still see the letterforms in the background) but something to really distinguish them as separate entities. For me it seems like they are just floating around the page and need something to separate them.
I really love the simplicity of this design and how clean it looks. The only thing I would change is the font color. The red is sometimes hard to read when it gets to the dark grey. Maybe even switching up the colors in each composition or putting a hint of color in the grey letters somewhere might look nice.
ReplyDeleteThe only suggestion I have is that you somehow separate the header and body text from the background (more-so than by changing the color). Perhaps a box underneath both of them (with lowered opacity so you can still see the letterforms in the background) but something to really distinguish them as separate entities. For me it seems like they are just floating around the page and need something to separate them.
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