Wednesday, April 10, 2013

Chinbayar Davaatseren, 1 st Critique


I am debating if I should keep the same style or do each on in different design or different colored background at least. Your feedback is greatly appreciated.

3 comments:

  1. I think this was great idea to highlight the areas you are talking about. I like the magnifying glass (if you are allowed to use that) but I also feel like you could get the same feel by just using a circle. I really like the "close up" with the tiny letters, I think that is a really nice touch. Overall, I like the composition and the color choices.

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  2. Love the composition, I'll speak with you when I see you next about some possible alternative font choices.

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  3. I like your color choices. Without the magnifying glass, it looks much better as you showed me a later version. A smaller page size than this would definitely be the most successful. By smaller, I mean shorter and wider. Keep on rocking.

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